Thursday, March 11, 2010

You Made Me

It's been a very looooooooooong while since I've the feeling to write a poem and when I do, I know that this bear trap is no longer bearable.

You Made Me

I feel like I am in a dream,
A dream within a dream,
Heavens so it seem,
With the beautiful sunlight beam.

I could no longer wake up,
Smitten in this world of fantasy,
Full of passion, love and mercy,
Oh, I just love you Mark.

Diabetes to the others shall it be,
Sweet is what it will be for me,
I cant believe I've found thee,
How lucky it is for me.

You filled me with obsession,
On the very first day of your impression,
I no longer feel any depression,
I want to be your possession.

You made me bright with happiness,
You made me cry like a child,
You made me feel complete,
Like I never felt before.

You made me laugh with cheerfulness,
You made me go wild, (you know when :P)
You made me love you so deep,
Never so I adore.

You made me,

Cronos Renzokuzen Chaos


Mark said...

I was practically speechless when I read this. Your heartfelt, romantic poem moved to the brink of tears. No one has ever done something like this for me before.

Lo gong zai, love you so much. MUUUUAKS!~

William said...

He has captured your heart and your blog.

pikey said...

OMG~!! this is so sweet and honey overlow~ glad u r experiencing this!

Marky's Little Devil said...

So fast ady got replies ar?? o.O swtz...famous blog...

Gratitude said...

Ooooooooo sweetness to the core!
Real challenge to the salmon/bear tag team. ^_^

Zemien said...

Oh. my. god. wow. wow. wow.

cookiedonut said...

*clap clap clap*

ichimaru akira said...

So sweet...

Mark,better treat him nice,k

Ultraman Jino said...

so nice to have someone write for you haha.

[Jino] - A man's not a man unless he knows how to shoot